Monday, August 6, 2012

Okay so I hope you all enjoy this poem, and tell me what you think about it :)







Gone
 


My heart aches when I have accepted that you are gone

Left me here hurting,

Feeling as if the world has collapse in front of me

Your selfish act cost me loosing a friend.


Someone who I loved.

Now I see you,stiff and cold

Your flesh feels like ice in the Artic.


The memories we shared makes me cry even harder,

Remembering your warm smile and your rolling on the floor laughing jokes,

Makes my chest feel tight with pain.


Thinking about you makes me fill up with pain,

You were the best friend I could've had

But then like others you left me.


If only you could've told me,

What Hell you were going through

I would've been there to save you.
 





9 comments:

  1. this is awesome!!! :D :D :D
    i like it :D very nicely done.

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  2. So beautiful!!!! I LURVE IT *huggies* :3

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  3. Thanks guys!! *huggles all* I was so nervous to post this!! I didn't know if I was getting the emotion right, but I guess I did :)

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  4. This is seriously awesome!

    And I agree with Kal,

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  5. Thanks Pyro for inviting me!! THIS IS AWESOMMEMEMEMEE

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  6. That was absolutely beautiful! Definitely felt it in my chest. Makes me want to hug somebody. ~grabs onto the nearest person and gives him a hug~
    Loved it, Lydia!

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